Tuesday, May 18, 2010

There is no line

[comments appreciated!]

I always want to be better.
Better at what I do, better at what I don't.
How can I know there's improvement,
When the white blends with the black.
In all of this chaos, disorder, mayhem...
I'm constantly trying to sort things out.
At what point will I discover how I did,
and which choices I made were right.

I guess this gives me something to do,
for the rest of my life.

[comments appreciated!]


  1. I don't know about this one. I think it ends to fast,try playing around with some more lines. But I do see lots of potential.

  2. While self-improvement is always something to welcome, sometimes you have to learn to accept yourself as you are. You're already "good enough". Relax, enjoy who and what you are right now. Life and circumstances will change you whether you want them to or not so don't struggle so hard to make it happen. If you can just quiet your thoughts, breathe and be in the moment, you'll realize that you don't always need to sort everything out, some things will just happen without any effort at all. Epiphanies will come to you when your mind is clear enough to recognize them. Daydream without a goal, walk without a destination, smile without a pose. Just be.


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